5/5 i can see you worked hard on this poem. its excellent. i could feel ur saddness through the poem. i cant answer y two ppl can hurt u so much but i know it happens too easily. i hope that things get better and u get treated better u deserve better than this. ur a wonderful person never forget it

I know how you feel. in the day I just try and forget her. I tell myself I'm fine. but at the end of the day. I'm stuck wondering why she left me here. good stuff =)

Ywow,it's really good,beatifully written,and well done 5/5

This was very very wow, it had so much emotion 2 it, keep up the good work, 5/5

OMG!!!! i love this poem its like your best one yet i really love it so much emotion keep up the good work.5/5.
~Shareeda

I really liked this poem....even though it was lengthey (I'm not big on that sorta thing) but I kept reading because it was good. 5/5 ^_^

Oh my , hun I am here for you and Loves for you. Great poem I can tell that you really put your sould into this , i feel your pain.

Damn i can feel your emotion in this one.....nice!!

Great job Gabbs! you've been busy. keep it up, i love reading your poems!! 5/5!
~Ms.Fobsta

Hey...nice poem...be strong, endure...you do have friends that wont betray you and who do care. Time will heal and time will cure...patience...if i can be patient then you can as well

-Jason-

*OoOoOo* I loved this poem! The anger was absolutly incredible! Like I was getting mad at them too as I read it! I felt like I was the one telling this story, which is exactly what you want the writer to feel! So i think you did an excellent job!

Wonderful poem. i know how u feel. you expressed your feelings so well that i know exactly how you felt. i enjoyed reading this poem. very well written and full of emotion. 5/5. keep up the good work. i hope you get through this and stay strong.

This poem is amazing.
Very touching.
You did a great job.
5/5

~Chelsea

Great poem!!
Very touching and full of emotion!
I loved it!
You can express you feelings very well..
I fully understand how you feel... Hope your doing well..
But well, You really have lots of talent..

Best of wishes
&& Keep it up
&& Take care

5/5

Full of emotion. Time will ease your pain. It may not seem like it now but hang in there.......

Wow... wonderful poem... the emotion is amazing and the word choice is spectacular... a strong poem :D

Oh my god sweetie, I could also see your tears on my computer screen. I can tell you poured your heart into this, even though it probably feels like you don't have much of one left. I went through something VERY similar to what you described in your poem this past summer, and the experience almost killed me...literally. I hope you find the courage to love again, and you honestly deserve someone who will care for you, and love you, and treat you the way you deserve to be treated. Try not to dwell on the bad things, the longer you do, the harder it is to pick yourself up. I know that it seems this pain will go on forever, but slowly, as time passes, it will begin to fade. If you ever need to talk to someone, don't hesitate to look me up. Great, GREAT write. 5/5

GOOD JOB!! wow it was sooo emotional keep it up hun. 5/5