So Close And Yet So Far

by nightstalker   Jan 21, 2007


I feel my fingers getting cold
I'm dying and I do want it
I'm coming down to your dark cellars
Please,love,take me from here
Take me with you
I'm so cold and dead
I can't feel anymore
I'm so close and yet so far
I need a step
I need a breath
I need a push
I need you
Oh please,love,come and end this suffering
I want to die but I want to die painlessly
Dead end for me and it is to black to see the wall stopping me
My dreams are too blank
Everything is blank
Please,love,I want to come with you
No,no,no...
Life don't come to me
I don't want you here anymore
Haven't you hurt me enough?
Please,love,take it away from me
Oh please,love,don't leave me here
Don't leave me here,my beautiful nothing

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  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    Your poem is really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is really good, it's so emotive and powerful, i really really felt a lot of emotions through readong this, my favourite lines were the last one and:

    I want to die but I want to die painlessly
    Dead end for me and it is to black to see the wall stopping me

    this was just so clever, i loved this poem, well done