Reality

by Loved In Hell   Jan 21, 2007


Can you tell that death is near
but wonder why there is no fear

I'll tell you why you have no fear to show
because you are exhausted of hangin on and just wanna let go
the pain has gotton to much to bear and now you just don\'t care

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  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was short but you got the point across nicely. i loved the way you did this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Short but still good....

    i think again you should change "wanna" to want to...and "gotton" to gotten...and it might read better if you break the lines apart.

    but good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Tho it was short it still deserves another Wow! <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    A great poem. 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow, this as short, but different and so pefect! i liked the way first yo stated a question, then you answered it, without losing the rhyme scheme. great work 5/5
    mezmeryz x

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