Great job!

Oh my god. That was so dark and deep. I loved it. It is amazing.

Really really good ... i enjoy this one ... every word keeps me reading faster wanting to know what is next ...

Very dark and interesting! I like the imagery and the structure! Well done! 5/5

Simple, and complex in it's own unique way. It was well written, and intriguing. Beautiful imagery.

I love your rhyming and the ending of your poem makes it really set the mood, I'll be reading more of your work :) xox sam

Oh this is a beautiful and haunting write that leaves me wishing for more. Wonderful, wonderful job dear poetess.

Wow... this is totally hott. another g8 poem. gud job!!

I really enjoyed this poem. i can't wait to read some more of your work :)

-resse

And your 13? Dang! You are like an amazing poet. I just could feel the pain and hurt in this poem. 5/5

Very deep, I like it. Young people these days man... so much more in touch with their emotions than in my day. Great work! 5/5

Very nicely written. The flow as well as the structure were both good. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Ohh very eerie and dark. But wonderful write. Good job, the flow was great, and the poem itself was amazing. Great job and keep it up. :]

Especially liked

Heart tears in two
Pain slicing through
Screaming is heard
But never say a word

really fine work 5/5

Very nicely done, it was short and meaningful. It seemed like lines that lacked detail, but it was still good, there was still a poetic touch to the way this was written. Afterall poetry is written with a creative mind, and thrives on uniqueness.

Wow nice poem reminds me of life, thats what i like about poems but thats my point of view not making that differance to the world, wright on and maybe the differance will come your way.

Wow this is so great! so well written and the verses all flow so well. keep writing =)

Your poem posses an inexhaustible fund of feelings..........

great job!!!!

god bless

+.+ Cool +.+

This is so good i love it