This poem is great. It explains exactly what love and life can be. Atleast that is what I got out of it, that is how it makes me feel.

I really liked this work of yours and plan to read more of your works. bravo!!

I really like this. It's very unique and short but to the point. I think you would be excellent at writing some styled poetry, shorter styles because you have a way of writing with such meaningful strong words. This is really great, I can't find anything wrong with it.

I'd also just like to thank you for your comment on my poem. I appreciate that there was critique, I want to improve, and it helps, so thanks. =]

5/5 for this.

Tammie