by debbylyn
I can so relate to this one! Excellent flow and rhyme. I especially like the first verse: |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice rhythm and rhyme. I like the poem in its entirety but I especially love the opening stanza. Great job! |
by Gem
Another one of my faves from you Charisma. |
by mazie
U r so talented i love all ur poems n i love this 1 aswell u always have gd ryhme n always full of emotion. dnt eva give up writing n waste ur talent i just wished i cood write like u.Mazie.X |
I love this poem.. its something im sure many people can relate to.. the poem has perfect flow and rhyme.. and every stanza fits together perfectly.. great job! |