Comments : Denial

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I can so relate to this one! Excellent flow and rhyme. I especially like the first verse:

    The answer I am waiting for
    Is hidden within your eyes
    But what the meaning is
    Drowns in sweet disguise

    Wonderful write as always! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice rhythm and rhyme. I like the poem in its entirety but I especially love the opening stanza. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Another one of my faves from you Charisma.
    The words seemed to flow effortlessly and although you've heard it before, you have such a talent for writing poems that so many people can relate to.
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

    (Thankyou for the comment. I guess writing is all that's left to so really)

  • 17 years ago

    by mazie

    U r so talented i love all ur poems n i love this 1 aswell u always have gd ryhme n always full of emotion. dnt eva give up writing n waste ur talent i just wished i cood write like u.Mazie.X

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I love this poem.. its something im sure many people can relate to.. the poem has perfect flow and rhyme.. and every stanza fits together perfectly.. great job!