by Poetically Speaking Jan 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Sweet Bear, |
by *Charisma*
It's sweet and sad. It's sad you can't even see your OWN WIFE!!!! But I hope it works out. |
by Chelsey
This was absolutely beautiful. Very sad and I could feel your desire for her. I can see how much you love her, and I hope that he leaves you alone. Wonderfully written and heartfelt. 5/5 |
Wow wonderful poem. the flow was very good. the emotion was raw and true. I felt your pain, and im so sorry that you have to go though it. |