Wow wonderful poem. the flow was very good. the emotion was raw and true. I felt your pain, and im so sorry that you have to go though it.

5/5
βlαξκ ♥ hεαrτ

This was absolutely beautiful. Very sad and I could feel your desire for her. I can see how much you love her, and I hope that he leaves you alone. Wonderfully written and heartfelt. 5/5

Chelsey

It's sweet and sad. It's sad you can't even see your OWN WIFE!!!! But I hope it works out.

On the poem....the flow's a bit off but it's good. and in this case with it just being an outpouring of emotions, maybe I should just shut up about the flow. :) nice.
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