by dandy
It's the moving on part that I'm not so good at...because im not sure if it's the right time. Thanks for the comment, keep writing! |
by Sh**tingst*r
I think this is the best poem you have ever written other than the Cheese poem |
by silvershoes
This is good advice, but not exactly a poem. However, that is my personal opinion and freedom of expression is wonderful. I guess I would consider this to be more of an inspirational quote, but I'm assuming its too long to be submitted as one. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this piece just the same. I will read more of your writes later. Take care 5/5 |
Great poem, short but to the point and very nicely written. Thanks for the comment on mine. I don't really cut myself, i just think it is such a very emotional thing to write about. I think maybe my poems will help open the eyes of people who really do cut. But thanks for the comment anyhow, and hang in there, life will someday be good to us. We just have to hold on to get there. |
by rubberduckii
I like it...it seems like it'd b like a rocker song lol. |
by rubberduckii
I like it...it seems like it'd b like a rocker song lol. |
Thats pretty sweet. i love reading other peoples poems |
by Miss Tammy
Very good poem. Really like it. |
by Maddeline
Very good, almost makes pain enjoyable. You are correct, it is better to hurt than not to feel at all. Good Job. |
by x0xJ3SSi3x0x
Thank you for the comment i like yours too i read a few =) |
by Erica Marie
Wow i love it! it's very true. |
by kevin
Very good 5/5 |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I love the way you write there so inspirational and deep. Very well written. Keep it up! 5/5 |