"wanting to drown myself in your arms" that line just took my breath away.... great job... you have a way with words

Very touching, been a while since you postedf..great stuff, pls comment on sum of my stuff, lotz new happening thnxs bro.

lissa

I love hte intensity, this is a great piece, excellent flow keep up the great work.

melissa

Thats a really good one hun...keep writing you're amazing at it...

<333 *~*amanda*~*

Very good contence, you sure had better ones on flow but your words are very good chosen