by Faceless Mirror Jan 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the deepest underground I feel no fear. |
by Mousie
Wow you really are a unique and excellent writer! great flow and great idea again wonderful job 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
I actually like the last word "Tranquility", it made the poem finish well. |
This is awsome dude, love the wording, paints alot of pictures for the reader, 5/5!!! leep it up!!! |
I didn't understand this quite myself, but it could just be me. |
by Sandra D
This is my favorite poem of yours, it's amazing!!! i love how you wrote it, and the words you used, and it flowed so well. you're an amazing writer, i can't wait for you to write more poems!!! |