Ohh very nice. Even though it's short, it has a great meaning and makes the reader think. Well done.

Amazing write. Just the simplicity of the title and the irony of the first line in this poem makes it simply wonderful. Keep it up! 5/5

This is a pretty amaing poem! it's got so much meaning, i love it!!
My favorite part was this,
"Explore unknown effects, play
notes you haven't touched."
that really got to me, im probably going to be thinking about that line for a while... great job!!!

Forever*Yours

You have a real talent. Truly exceptional. Very few people have the gift of saying so much in such a short amount of time. You've truly been blessed. *5/5*

This is a wonderful write. So much powerful in so few words. i loved it.
5/5

marcella

I'm not really sure i can decipher this poem. It seems like it holds some important meaning, but this, i think, belongs as a quote.
4/5
~Stephen White
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