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Kenneth you make me a very very very happy girl!

I loved this poem before and I love it even more now I saw the title and screamed with delight haha

Your style is astounded and your words a wonderfuly strung together.

I hate you haha I demand you write a cr-ppy poem xD

I miss you and love you lots and lots.
Darling.

I liked this one, the first 2 stanza's some lines seemed too long, and when i read this stanza, I knew I loved it

A semi-darkness has begun to arrive outside
longing to reach me, impatient and strong.
I pull down the blinds and pack my bags in hope,
a hope so lost, well, I now realize, this is where I belong.

you have talent,
well done
xxxxx

You have a compelling way with words. You just carry the reader along effortlessly and I want to read more...
I feel useless as I have no critisism to give, and I always give some suggestions...so...my suggestion is keep writing. I'm adding you to my favs, glad you chose to read my poem!

Well. I liked your usage of words, and the story behind this was brilliant. I haven't really seen a poem like this before. Some parts I understood, and well some parts I didn't. All around it was a great poem though!

My favorite lines were these :

It's early afternoon and I stare outside
waiting for something to happen, just to comfort me,
maybe the contour of a known world that hasn't died.

I liked the way you had expressed your thoughts here :) thank you!
Marjan