by Tom Jan 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Why weren't you there for me when I needed you. |
I know what your going through. My father was an ass to me, if you ever need to talk.... |
by Tom Swart
I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site. Keep up the good writes. |
by x.Athame.x
Very sad, the emotion can be felt through this piece. A wonderful job. *5/5 |
by Cindy
Very sad. Your pain can be felt in your words. |
by Sandra D
Another great poem! this is really sad, but it happens, and no matter how hard we try, we can't fix it... im sure tht didn't make you feel any better, sorry! anyways, it flows really well. my fave part was the first 2 lines, love em!! 5/5! |