Another great poem! this is really sad, but it happens, and no matter how hard we try, we can't fix it... im sure tht didn't make you feel any better, sorry! anyways, it flows really well. my fave part was the first 2 lines, love em!! 5/5!

Forever*Yours

Very sad. Your pain can be felt in your words.

Very sad, the emotion can be felt through this piece. A wonderful job. *5/5

I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site. Keep up the good writes.

I know what your going through. My father was an ass to me, if you ever need to talk....