I am Invisible (edited and finished)

by xXLost in the Nightmare of LifeXx   Jan 21, 2007


Girl:
You look through me.
I am invisible.
Invisible to you.
Invisible to the world.
Why do you not see me?
You don't even spare a glance.
I long to feel your touch,
Your embrace,
Your lips against mine.
But you can not.
But you will not.
For you look right through me.
I am invisible.

Boy:
I look for you,
but I can't see,
what the world has hidden from me.
I can't find you,
looking everywhere,
you're not here, you're not there.
My lips are cold,
my arms are empty,
Here I'm hoping you will see me.
You don't,
but when the crowd parts,
there you are...

Girl:
There you are.
The winter wind blows harshly.
I see you.
Standing there.
You are looking in this direction.
But you do not see me.
You must see something past me.
Not me.
I shiver and take a last glance at you.
A tear falls.

Boy:
For a split second, I thought you were there.
My mind plays tricks, and teases me.
I shout your name,
my confession of love.
My love for you.
My final hope for seeing you one last time,
for you've been taken from me,
and I begin to drown in my own tears,
this sorrow-filled sea.

Girl:
Is it a trick?
That confession of love?
A confession I needed to hear.
My name...
How I love to hear it come from your lips.
I turn away.
It must be a trick.
I am not worthy of your love.
I never was.
More tears fall.
Now you are not the only one drowning.
Who can save me?
Who can save us?

Boy:
A single noise awakens me.
Brings me back to reality.
That sting of pain,
Your tears do not fall in vain,
for they have awoken me.
I open my eyes to see you.
I approach you, also crying,
not saying a word I take you in my arms.
It is I who do not deserve you,
but I shall treasure every moment we have together,
for that is how much I love you.

Girl:
Can this be real?
I am finally in your arms.
My tears moisten your shirt.
This was my dream.
To feel your embrace.
But now it is reality.
Sweet reality.
I will always treasure this moment.
This single moment,
That brought me a lifetime of happiness.
For I love you as well.
And it is an everlasting love,
That will never leave my heart.

Written by me and Jake K.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HayHay

    That was really sweet!!!
    Luv Hayley

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Gah...this is truly, how you say, AWESOME. The concept is lovely, and the style....is just something I don't often read. Not structured, but that's how I prefer it. Free and full of emotion.
    Guess you could say I loved this, but you'll have to keep impressing me.

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Kaite Bug, I'll support w/e decision you make, even if I don't agree with it.... but this poem is very lovely, you are so lucky to have someone to love you... 5/5, how could I rate less?
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

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