The poem itself is very encouraging and well thought out, I like the flow and the way you worded it for the most part, For a school armarter I guess you could say it was great for anythig thing else well the jury is still out Robert....

Hm... Not really my type of Poem. But as a critique. I must Judge the poem and not the subject of the poem. The title was not so... great. its a Fair title. but not... really as "One" with the poem, I figure the "Were all a saint" really does not match. The structure was simple. I liked the structure. I love the Idea of your poem. The meaning of WHY you write your poem. Your viewpoint was seen clearly. Not Excellent. But good. Voted 4/5

Wow.................that was written so well.
You have a real talent for writing poetry. 5/5