Dear Diary Part III

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 22, 2007


Dear Diary,
Something was wrong in his voice.
He was sad and I didn't know why.
I almost didn't see his face again.
And I did nothing else but cry.

Dear Diary,
A miracle happened between us.
Someone answered our prayers.
We never thought it'd happen.
And that we'd be standing there.

Dear Diary,
His smile was better than ever.
We felt so blessed our wish came true.
He held me close into his chest.
And finally got to say "I Love You".

Dear Diary,
I can't tell you how amazing I felt.
To see his face after a horrible time.
I know everything is going to be OK.
And I can close my eyes, and sleep tonight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    :] awwwww! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, im really speechless reading this poem, you are really a great writer and a great inspiration, i love this poem. keep it up. another 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Fascinating. Again. Good title. Matches the structure of your poem and with the Continuation of the Previous Part I & II. I did not like the beggining. There was tension in my mind asking why "He" was so upset? As i continue reading. I finish. And I still dont know the Cause of why he was upset. Interpretation was left in the poem. But not enough information was in the poem so i can interpret the cause. So this is something i hope you avoid next time. Like always. Your emotions were seen in the poem. So again. Not excellent. But still good. Voted 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny

    That is so awsome. That is how I feel about my man. Great Job
    Sunshine

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