I really like this poem. It reminds me of a song, but I can't remember which one. Either way, it was really good! Keep up the good work!

~Liana~

P.S.- Thanks for the comment on my poem. It really means a lot to me

WOAH...amazing poem, i loved the whole bit....OMG! I love how you wrote a specific word at the end of each paragraph and used it in the next, very original!

I love how you put this together:

To rise above and break the chains
That prevent me from being free

Well done, keep it up!! definately 5/5