Cold, Mild, Hot or Refreshing

by Jenni   Jan 22, 2007


So I sit here holding a smile,
waiting for you to reconcile.
I cannot seem to understand
Why I am left to reprimand.
There must be some unknown reason
for I am alone this season...
This smile on my face will fade
from all the mistakes that you made.
Why am I standing to debate
everything about you I hate?
These words slip coarsely through my lips
cannot stop them with fingertips.
It's what I have needed to stay
to stop from withering away.

Yet, I've run out of good reasons,
I will blend in with the seasons...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Hmm...

    i find it hard to believe that there was no flow. i thought the flow was just fine!!! i also find a lot that when i think of something to write about the persons poem and then vote on it, i forget what my comment was!!!!
    anyway, great poem.

    5/5
    Allanah

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on your poem. Keep writing. Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem.. however.. there was really no flow... the rhyming was good as well as the flow.. i saw another comment who wrote there was no flow.. i disagree this poem flows fine!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    "Yet, I've run out of good reasons,
    I will blend in with the seasons..." That is such a brilliant line...this is an excellent poem, keep up the great work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    The rhyming was good but there was no flow at all. after every two lines when it rhymed it would cut off and the nest two lines would be a whole new thought and it didnt fit together. when something rhymes it should flow with the next rhymes. just my thoughts. i thought the words were unique and the message was quite interesting. keep writing

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