The rhyming was good but there was no flow at all. after every two lines when it rhymed it would cut off and the nest two lines would be a whole new thought and it didnt fit together. when something rhymes it should flow with the next rhymes. just my thoughts. i thought the words were unique and the message was quite interesting. keep writing

"Yet, I've run out of good reasons,
I will blend in with the seasons..." That is such a brilliant line...this is an excellent poem, keep up the great work!!!

Cute poem.. however.. there was really no flow... the rhyming was good as well as the flow.. i saw another comment who wrote there was no flow.. i disagree this poem flows fine!

Excellent job on your poem. Keep writing. Take care Cindy

Hmm...

i find it hard to believe that there was no flow. i thought the flow was just fine!!! i also find a lot that when i think of something to write about the persons poem and then vote on it, i forget what my comment was!!!!
anyway, great poem.

5/5
Allanah