by Rachel RTVW Jan 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Your smile paints a picture, for everyone else to see, |
Awww.. more shivers. nursing has shown you alot. your truely gifted, yuor poetry is amazing |
by kate
Luv it ! ur an amazing writer, keep it up :D |
by Haitham
Excellent job! This poem was very intense and well written.. Compliments to the poet. |
That was a realy good poem you should see some of mine some time!! ^_^ |
by ben thompson
Excellent write. many of us forget how fragile life is. great reminder of our mortality. 5/5 |