An interesting analogy ... energy of life, resting peacefully inside ... how I too long!

The title caught me immediately. Very interesting poem.

Wow. I was really impressed with this one. I don't usually like nature poems, and when I read the name of this one, I didn't want to read it at all. And then I started reading, and it actually has a very deep meaning.

I loved it. I just...loved it. Lol. It was so deep in meaning, and things I had never thought of before. Like the bag of love. That was adorable. I wished I had thought of it myself. I just seemed to get lost in this poem, amongst others. I felt safe, but also in danger at the same time. It was weird, but what can I say when I'm into a poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

So good....beautiful....Hard to choose a favorite verse, but this one did it:

I wish I could hold a bag of love
So when the tears come pouring
They could be saved with affection

Different and interesting write. Well done. 5/5. Debbie

Omg!!!!!!!!! i toltally luved it... it was beautifully beautiful!!
greaaaaaaaaaaaaaat job sweetie

It is really awsome... holds such a beauty in it.. really a brilliant job..5/5

There is not one poem of yours that I do not like. all of your poetry is amazing.

i especialy liked this one because of the vivid images you created in my mind! superb work! 5/5

Excellent write... nice imagery and great picture you painted for the readers. Never thought I'd see water and sun in such a way... 5/5