by Brittany Jan 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I liked you from the very start now you know what\'s in my very hart you larened that one day when my friend sliped and told you that I liked you and i said that was very true you said we be friends forever that didn\'t happen I lerned every word you spoke was a lie and that made me cry you are not worth it you are not worth my teirs we are now stangers as we pass eachother to you i am invisible we are no longer friends and never talk it is like you hate the very thought I wish you were my frined but in the end all the words you spoke were lies and are now frases that don\'t matter |
by Rachel
Awesome poem! |
This is a really good one. And i know how that feels. |
by Curry
This is good! i love it. |
by Brittany
Hey becca the poems i write are based on my life it is a good way 2 write poems well g2g ttyl bye bye |
Aw.. this is sad .. but cute.. i like it alot the only suggestion i have is to put it into poetry form sperate this into lines and stanzas.. that may require re-writing some parts or adding parts so you can get a structure but well worth it |