Aw.. this is sad .. but cute.. i like it alot the only suggestion i have is to put it into poetry form sperate this into lines and stanzas.. that may require re-writing some parts or adding parts so you can get a structure but well worth it

Hey becca the poems i write are based on my life it is a good way 2 write poems well g2g ttyl bye bye

This is good! i love it.

This is a really good one. And i know how that feels.

Awesome poem!