I love you forever

by Rosie K   Jan 22, 2007


The way you smile when we're together, the hint of longing in your eyes.
The way you're not stupid or clever, the feeling noone can describe.
The way you laugh, the way you talk, even the way you cry, makes me notice each second drags on but when you're here they flutter by.

I love you forever

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  • 17 years ago

    by FREEtoFLY

    Interesting. it took me a couple read throughs to understand it so it was rough to read, not smooth so you might want to work on that :) other wise very nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow this is nice. Just the begining needs a little work I think this poem deserves a 4 so ill give it a 5 nice poem again maybe u can read one of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny

    Cute

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