Hey!
I really liked this. It's got a nice rhythm to it, a nice flow. One thing. I don't really like this beit: "I am a puppet,
Where's are my boss?" well mainly the last bit. It doesn't fit as seamlessly as the rest of the poem.

But yeah good poem. keep it up.

Jemma

It was good, it flows good, and the emotion is very strong, the only thing was "where's are my boss?" the rest was amazing.

I really sometimes feel like this,so relating and sad

I wonder in the darkness,
The light to bright to see,
Confusion has warped my mind
The truth is being shown now
What?
The little hurting me.

these were my favorites
Well done

Oh i know the way this feels so well :*(

You have such beautiful work yourself... I have added you on my favorites list, and you get a 5/5 because I like this poem and your others... awesome....