What a sweet dedication to your father. Rhythm and rhyme superb. Very heartfelt poem you have here. Keep up the good work!

Wow! You are amazing in the words you write.This is so beautiful and sad. I am just in awe after reading this one.

Beautiful, sad and hopeful all in one! Nicely written, good flow and great message! I'm sure your dad is smiling down on you.

Sooooooooooo
beautiful........got me by the throat
not voting on this....
just out there on its own...
just too close......