by Kaila
Wow im so sorry about your Grandma i feel your pain and this poem was definetly excellent again im so sorry but writing it down is the best way to get your feelings out |
by kate
I know the feeling, i lost my grandad to cancer after a 6 year battle, and its been almost 2 years now since he past away, trust me it will get better, it wont ever be as great without her, but it will get better in time :) |
by Lu
Is it normal for me to feel so utterly lost? |
by Jen
That poem made me cry Gemma its so lovely, I do understand the pain your going through and understood the poem. |
Very moving. my condolences. with love |
This was so sad and I'm sorry to hear about your loss. Be strong. Our thoughts are with you. |
by Animus
Wow! |
by Kaila
Wow Im so sorry for your loss and sry I did not read this sooner! it was a fabulous work of art and I loved it extreamly! 5/5 |
by Tite
I know how you feel. Something like that happened to me recently and it was my cousin. The only reason I didn't write about it is b/c I wouldn't be able to finish it. But having that pain in your body lasts forever. The only way to ease it is to move on. To think they are in a better place does alot of good, but it doesn't go away. Just stay strong and keep your faith. |
So sad, |
Sorry for the loss dear though i think its better sometimes to leave rather than live in pain (medically). |
Great poem. Its awesome that you dedicated it to her. I hope you feel better. 5/5 |
by e l flo
Aw. I am so sorry for your loss. I have experienced some like that and I know how you feel. I hope things get easier for you. Keep writing, I know it will help. Especially because you are amazing! |
by Marina
This is an amaizeing peom... Yes, actualy i can feel part of the pain... you see, my grandmothers raised me, ever since i had to leave my parents when i was 7... and now they are both gone.. and no, their not comeing back.. and i cry, every day, in there memory.. Inside i know they don't want me crying, but the fire burns so hot , turning my heart into ashes... my dads mother, she died with Parkensons and scoliosis deasess... and she was in constant pain, so i did all taht i could for her... and my other grandma, my mothers mother, she died, she was haveing trouble walking couldnt feel her legs most of the time and when she could it really ached.... but this... this is just a short bit of how they suffered... they both raised me ... 7 years... and they lioved in sepparete places with their own familys, i was finaly a part of a good... loveing family.. and now, i am back with my dad... i have no mother... i... am.. alone... anyways, i... wow... there is a lot here that i really did need to say... i'm so very sorry.. if ever you wish to talk.. i'm always going to be open to anything you've got to say.. |
by kiara
I felt like crying with you when i read this poem ive never experienced the loss of a luvd one so i cant tell you i know wht your going through all i can do is say atleast her suffering has ended and that im truely sorry for wht you must be experiencing |
by donna
Aww that was so sad and I am truly sorry for your loss... I actually think this was very well written and there is nothing wrong with the flow. |
Omg Gem, you need to write! I miss reading your poems! |
Gem you are in my prayers i know exactly how you feel. my dad abandoned me as a child and my nana and grandpa died only a year apart and i was close to my nana to and you are right shes more than a nana she was a lot more. you will be in my thoughts hope everything is going smoothly or atleast soon will |
I see nothing wrong with this poem. often times the truest of poems brings out the best of poems. true emotion is what poetry is all about. |
by Chelsea
Okay i know i have commented this poem before but the creepy thing is my nana passed away just a month after yours. how are you holding up hun? |