Leaving???

by m!2235_d_f7!n+!!   Jan 22, 2007


You cant handle tha heat???
Why dont you just leave???
Got too much stress???
Just get up and leave
Teasing and taunting
Please, just leave !!!
Just because of a little sleep;
Now you are here with me.
Tap, tap, tap
a soft knock at the door
"Who is it?"
"Come in"
And there you stand at my door
Sterss on youe shoulders
Troublesome worries on your mind
You come in, sit down;
And then you start to cry.
You got in trouble on a Friday night,
Sunday night there was a fight
"Leave if you want"
"You think you're so grown"
So you left
They should have known
Now tear after tear you cry
What happend to make you do this, and Why???
Just a little "love" put your mind to it
Now we sit here all confused
All because you chose to choose
Now dont stress yourself,
Just free yourself...
Soooo... are you leaving???

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    It's a little fractured, and I like the way it's left with no clear resolution. But I would say on the whole that this is not a bad effort. It just looks hurried in the spelling and structure, to me. Good content though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job! Hope to see more from you. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by m!2235_d_f7!n+!!

    This is a poem that is based on a true story!!!