by m!2235_d_f7!n+!! Jan 22, 2007
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Life, society /
other
You cant handle tha heat??? |
It's a little fractured, and I like the way it's left with no clear resolution. But I would say on the whole that this is not a bad effort. It just looks hurried in the spelling and structure, to me. Good content though. |
by Cindy
Good job! Hope to see more from you. Take Care Cindy |
This is a poem that is based on a true story!!! |