This is so good, much way better than anything i could ever write. and thank you so much for the comment, i was so happy when i read it. thank again shanik

Hey,
Your work is really good. I enjoy reading it keep up the good work!
~Linzii

Hey ur a great poet. rlly deep and understanding of things. and u can rlly feel for the words. oh and thx for the comment by the way.

Such a beautiful poem

So off the wall and i luv it.
5/5

The last para is the best. so great read. i just could read it so easily, and i loved that in any poem.

i gave it a 5. cause the title and poem itself is individual. great.

David

Love it! flows great and i loved alot of the words you chose! great job!

Very interesting however I think that, the last verse was kinda of missing something, not sure what it was though so I cant really help srry bout that.

Very good.....

5/5. Another amazing poem. You write amazing dark poems! keep them up!

I really like this poem. keep up the good work.

Wow, i really like this

U know...it has a very interesting flow....seriously
dont know if its intentional...but its flow is paradoxical to the content of the poem..
almost a kid like song flow with deep depressing sad lyrics
very good work...i loved it...5/5 from me =D