Emotions of the hidden room

by kimara4955   Jan 22, 2007


Its a dull and simple day, the wind passes softly through the air, slightly swaying that large old tree from side to side, that proudly stands outside my bedroom window.

Those clouds of white and Grey interlock together to make a big meaningless puzzle.

As i lay here, lost in the sea of blue bedding, the waves viscously overlapping each other.

The bed sitting in a pool of blood and flames, which splashes variously around the room, the escape root blocked by a wall of Red hot scolding flames.

At the father side of the room, the emotions swiftly sway through the rich blue sea to look upon a soft and sensitive sandy shore

i know its not much of a poem, i written it along time ago about a room i use to share.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I really like the way you used the words youve chosen for this poem, they do not rhyme but the way you used them, they make the poem very enjoyable to read. Really good. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Awesome poem 5/5 your a really a great writter

  • 17 years ago

    by bobo2011

    Wow. that was great. i could feel like i was there when you wrote it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite. Most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.

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