I like this poem. very original yet you kept to the point. you didnt lose me at all throughout nad I didnt feel like i wanted it to end!

congrats.

5.5

can you please comment and vote on one of my poems pretty please :)

This is the first slang poem I have read on here, and I have to say I quite enjoyed it.
Original and unique in concept, and I liked the imagery used.

I enjoy this a lot! Very original! 5/5