Comments : Changes....

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Penning the final pages to finally close the book
    You've moved on already, I doubt you'll even look"

    That couplet really got to me.
    Such a wonderful poem, how can this not have comments.
    Well done on this piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by alix

    Thank you ....i didnt really think it was that great at first i was nervous about putting it up but im glad you enjoyed it makes me want to write alot more : )