Interesting indeed. short but nice and it gets the point across. 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |
Short and to the point, but I like it!!! Thank you for the comment on my poem, consturctive critism is always welcome!! 5/5 |
by Chelsey
Short, but to the point. Very nicely done. Most short poems I read are ..ehh.. but this was good. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow, very simple yet full of pouring emotion. Amazing write! 5/5 |
by Pure Silence
Its nice to see you back dearest |
by Allis MT
Very deep, I understtod half, but i'll think about this for a few more days. |
by Sandra D
I like this whole short, but to the point thing you got goin on. it's amazing that you can do that in so little words... anyways, i like this poem, i don't know exactly what, but something about it is... i don't know how to describe it, but it's a good thing! |
Like i said before, the way u write is different but different is good, i like this one too, 5/5!!! keep on writing like this, its cool!!!! |
by Synh
Hehe. Short, sweet, and to the point, huh? New but original. I enjoyed it very much. You were able to say so much within but a few words. I feel bad because I want to say more but I truly dont what to say. This is a real piece of art. *5/5* |
by N J Thornton
I really do like how you write, it's all simple, short but it has a very powerful meaning. I don't know what you intended this to mean, but to me it was about avoiding something because it feels safer and is easier, which is rather a cool message. |
by Marjan
This was really interesting for me! |
by e LIZ a beth
I really like the way you write and the way you think. i mean from what i can see in your poems. but i think that its a little sketchy you need to take time and read them to yourself and maybe if you did that then they'd turn out better. |
by Empty Space
Minimal effort - no risk |