Platinum band and a sparkling jewel

by mazie   Jan 22, 2007


You put your hand on my leg
and softly said my name
looked deep in my eyes
i knew we would never be the same

you told me you loved me
and then got down on one knee
gave me a beautiful ring
and asked me to agree

you told me we are good
and together we could rule
and to prove it you gave me
a platinum band and a sparkling jewel

as i looked back at you
i saw that look in your eye
that told me you love me
and it made me want to cry

because it was then i knew
that what you were saying was true
are life would be so much better
if it was just me and you

so my answer darling is yes
and I'll be with you the rest of my life
you will be handsome husband
and I'll be your forever loving wife

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hillstar123

    I really enjoyed this poem and it too kept a smile on my face.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I smiled as i read these words because i can relate to them all, except the band was white gold, not platinum, lol.
    I loved it!
    5/5
    *Gem*
    (Thankyou for the lovely comment x)