by LadyPearl
Beautiful job. A perfect poem between friends. My favorite stanza was: |
Lovely work emma, I enjoyed reading it. |
by Allisha Fox
Cool |
by Cindy
What a beautiful poem for your four legged friend. Hope things go your way and you do not have to get rid of her. Good luck! Cindy |
That was a realy good poem you should see some of mine some time!! ^_^ |
by Tom Swart
Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be. |