Comments : Abbei

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job. A perfect poem between friends. My favorite stanza was:
    "She trots with such grace,
    And gallops with such power,
    Canters with my heart,
    And comes in lonely hour,"

    Very flowing and vivid

  • 17 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Lovely work emma, I enjoyed reading it.
    I emailed you...

    xoxo
    Matt

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Cool

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem for your four legged friend. Hope things go your way and you do not have to get rid of her. Good luck! Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    That was a realy good poem you should see some of mine some time!! ^_^
    ~Sablehuskey~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

    Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotions. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.