Is this love

by TABITHA   Jan 22, 2007


One blade is all i takes
to take my life away
and when u see the blood
u cry because you feel like ur alone
U give him a note
telling him not to read it until tomorrow when u come over
Why did u say the things u said
in my memories its me and u , thats all i see
my tears falling like a puddle
i wrote my suicide on my wall
then scream in the hall
pass out and die,
u saw the look on my eyes when u said it was over
n all u cud think of was y did i make her do this
n that u miss me so much
willingly u go to the kitchen and take a knife out
they try to stop u, but they already saw the look in ur eyes, the tears so emotional, u drop the knife and fall to the floor, crying i took her life away
i took her life away
n now u feel so ashamed
together for not even a year
but spent every moment together
y did u take ur life he screams
y did u leave me all alone here to suffer, he realize the note, and reads it, then he screams i luv u too so much, but y did u leave me here, please come back, u pick up the knife and slice ur wrist and blood is every where u fall and die, u wake up and u realize that u just killed ur self, u turn around and see me and u kiss me and say why did u leave me, i missed u so much

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really like this poem and i can really relate. it reminds me of some of my poems. it would mean sooooooo much to me if you read my poem Love To Ashes and tell me what you think. thanks shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is so emotive, very powerful, a gruesome yet amazing poem, this is a really moving piece of work, well done