by Finalgravedigger Jan 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My heart covered up in a heavy fog, when my eyes open they might as well be shut. Confused of hwat you show me, I try so hard. you were my light and now my darkness. Lost in love as i yearn for you. The hope I seek is gone along with the light. I wander aimlessly trying to find the light. It's harder then ever since i want to let go of you. If I let go though, is the light gone too. |
Its different.. but i like it.. different is good.. |
by Psychopathic
I totally relate to this. u write ur poems differently and thats cool. keep it up. |
by Sh**tingst*r
It was a very good poem..very deep, nice show of emotion in it. |
by Kei
Wow thats kool i can feel the qustion and sorrow in it its great! |
It's a very deep poem.. I totally understand what you are talking about!!! Awesome poem. 5/5!!! I hope things get better for you |