You're Hurting Her

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Jan 22, 2007


Look beyond,
The obvious,
And you might just realize,
What you are doing to her.

Suffocating her dreams,
Strangling her hopes,
Expanding her fears.

All you do,
Is hurt her,
Throwing her,
And all she has,
Towards the dirt.

You think that she is worthless,
Nothing good for you,
Can come from her,
But think again.

To someone else,
She's their world,
Their savior.

To them she's perfect,
And brings so much,
Into their world.

But what she doesn't see,
Is the love from someone else,
Who cares.

She's oblivious to this feeling,
From someone close,
Only because of the shadow you make,
Over this true love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I really liked how you had written this poem. It flowed very well and had such a great emotion. Great Job!

    Cannot Enter Contest [CEC] is where people cannot enter my contest that I hold. The reason I have that is because they had shown me they can't even as care to tell me they can't do it. I'm thinking once I get more then 20 people on my CEC then I'll hold a contest just for them so they can get their name of the CEC and those who don't do the CEC contest then they will just have to stay on there til I hold another contest. It's an Idea that I made up for myself. It works pretty well!!

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww, this was filled with so much emotion that it really showed thru. good work hun.
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow i love this poem.it reminds me something thats going on with me! keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by broken heart

    Wow i love tihs one u rote it so good and thnks for comenting mine i need as much help as i can get

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was excelent and well written it had so much truth i loved it 5/5

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