by Espoirfailed
This is a clever idea, quite a nice one as well although this poem is sad, i wish there was someone that loved everyone, well done on this poem, it's great |
by Lady Nik
I really like this poem it's really good. keep it up. it would me so much to me if you would read my new poem Love To Ashes. and tell me what you think. thank you shanik |
by x.Athame.x
Emotion welling up from the heart for a poigant write that is touching and sad. Definitely a 5 or 5 for this piece. Best wishes, and blessed be. |
by Curry
This is one of my favorites! good work! |
by Sandra D
Ooh! i love this one! i absolutely adore your choice of words, and it flows really well. great job! |
by amoxi
This poem was excelent and well written it had so much truth i loved it 5/5 |
by broken heart
Wow i love tihs one u rote it so good and thnks for comenting mine i need as much help as i can get |
by Curry
Wow i love this poem.it reminds me something thats going on with me! keep up the good work. |
Aww, this was filled with so much emotion that it really showed thru. good work hun. |
I really liked how you had written this poem. It flowed very well and had such a great emotion. Great Job! |