This is a clever poem, n u kept to the structure really well without ruining the poem, well done

Dude i totally love this poem. even though it took me forever to understand it. im a freakin retart!!!

Unusual style but you did it nicely. thanks for all the comments on my poems and for the placing in your contest. it meant a bunch!
Charisma*

I love to see poems with difficult styles, this one is beautiful, you mastered the style, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

MM NICE. THE WORD CHOICE OF THIS WAS MARVELOUS!!!!! I REALLY DONT HAVE EXPERIENCE ON THE FORMAT, SO I CANT SAY MUCH THERE.

This was a good use of the form. I tried using it once, but it didn't turn out all that well.
I think maybe there were some cliche ideas in this, but just the creative use of form makes it good.

Wow. this was superb. i loved the type of poem, i've never tried writing it, but you seemed to have executed it with sheer excellence. wonderful job, once again, 5/5

I loved this!
oOiginal and unique in concept, and a joy to read.
The wording and flow were perfect.

Great job with this one. I love this type of poem and you did it so well. It had a really good flow. 5/5

marcella

Oh. Excellent. One of your best, by far. You're very good with set rhyme schemes [try them more =]].
I loved the rhyming, the flow, and the story. Not too cliche and the title was very drawing. Great job on this. Definately deserves a 5.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5