Remember Me

by khobo   Jan 23, 2007


Remember my name
'Cause you wont hear it again
Remember my name
'Cause Imma be one old friend
Remember my name
'Case of what we been through back then

Remember my warmth
'Cause you'll feel it no more
Remember my warmth
'Cause the tears'll pour
Remember my warmth
'Cause you'll miss it for sure

Remember my love
'Cause I don't let go
Remember my love
'Cause we made each other glow
Remember my love
'Cause I was hurt more than you know

Remember me
'Cause I'd remember you
Remember me
'Cause I always loved you
Remember me
'Cause I use to be right there with you

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  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I liked the feeling and style of this. A lot of times repetition doesn't work right, but you made it flow really well. I think this is a really good poem and I felt the emotions in it.

    5/5
    Caitlin

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Well done loved the style and the feeling
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    Aww...
    that almost made me cry=/.
    great poem though!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sharon

    So good. wonderful use of repetition

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