by Sandra D Jan 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I know you just said it, |
by Spirit
Beautiful poem with a deeper meaning. yes it is about letting go but it could also be about holding on or at least wanting to. amising poem very well written:~)Sam |
by Fsams
I know you just said it, |
You expresed your feelings to your lost love so well with a perfect flow ..good work |
by Sydney
I cant tell if it was forced or not but I like it overall. You were able to express your feelings quite well. It also made me think as well. Really nice job:] |
The ryhming did seem a bit forced but it was still a good poem so all together i give it a 5/5 |