I esp. love the last three lines amazn stuff here, great job trip im so glad things wit u and bexky are still wonderful, we rly are lucky :) pls comment a few of my poems esp. my poem, AS MY HEART SLIPPED INTO A COMMA, i need comments and yeah thnxs so much.

lissa

This poem rocks!!!! And thank you for understanding how I feel! 5/5

Wow a truely beautiful love poem. i have read alot but this is one of my faves. 5/5 love willow xxoo