by Colby Jan 23, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Sitting there on the bench |
by Perfection
This happens to everyone.. GREAT poem man i enjoyed this =) |
Really good but ya say think alot |
by Bridget
Hey this poem was really good.. i actually got really into the poem and so when it said it was just a dream i felt like really gutted for the person in this poem. where it says 'your mood turns to a glee' i don't think there is supposed 2 be an 'a' in there.. but i'm not completely sure so if you know that it is then just excuse me lol. great work 5/5 :) |