Pain you cause

by Kaila   Jan 23, 2007


Do you see how much
pain you cause
Just want to feel your touch
I think I\'m going insane
From wanting you So much
Walking in the rain
Trying to get over you
I cant escape the pain
Just want to hear your voice again
But your already dead

Wrote when i was 12
Date 1/12/05

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  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Short, but cute. It was great. I somehow got surprised when I read last sentence. x) Anyway, great job
    Keep it up
    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow that was very cute 5/5 keep it up. Nice and short.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow. for a twelve year old, thats excellent.
    Some bittersweet wording in this piece, i like it
    5/5
    *Gem*

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