That was just beautifully. I would hate to oneline this poem. JEEZ. Thats a 5/5. And the contest (Fairytale.), I wont judge it untill 1) all the poems are done, 2) by the 26th. The 25th was a typo. hehe.

This is very eloquent, nicely paced, and delicately emotional without being weak or plaintive. A very mature and enjoyable piece.

Another good one hun. I liked the perspective on this one =] Very well written and enjoyable.

Ciao