Short & Sweet

The title says it all, short and SWEET!!! I love this poem, It made me smile if only for a little while. Keep writing and I'm sure you'll go far. 5/5 btw thanks for the comments I didnt comment back quickly because I've been really busy. Sorry. Keep writing =)

They do go together greatly i loved them and p.s. thanks for commenting my poems ur great

They do go together very well. & i loved the title, it describes the poem perfectly. short & sweet. great job. 5/5

You're right, they do go together. good job! The rhymes don't seem forced and it flows easily. I love the second stanza.

"Leave behind all your worries
Free your mind of all your fears
Throw away your tragic stories
Wipe away your tears"

Beautiful!

Emotion was expressed well but i was left wanting a little more from it. Still a good poem though. I agree with you, if you had them separate it just wouldnt be as good! I don't give out 5's freely but i think i will on this one.

5/5

*kayla

They do. they are short but meld together well.

5 from me. david