Comments : Closer Than Close

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This ius my heart, and I really hope you guys like my work and will come back and read more than this. thnxs.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    I liked this. just think about how perfect things are when you spend time with him. and you'll be feelin better. good stuff =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    FADE
    FADe
    FAde
    fade
    away.

    I love that..... its a great use of concrete poetry within another poem... good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice. I liked your wording and the thoughts. Keep up the good writes. Bravo! Love can be such a cruel and brutal beast sometimes.